There is a lot of dissonance. Very ambient. The drums could use more processing maybe. Interesting at the least.
There is a lot of dissonance. Very ambient. The drums could use more processing maybe. Interesting at the least.
The arrangement is a little different. The build needs some work to keep the listener focused. The drums are weak at times, and lack clarity. Make sure the low end is clear and defined.
thanks i know my drums need so much work but its hard to find any good drummachines, and yea i had a lot of problems making this one trying to tone things done then up is meh, but thanks!
I like the beginning, but I agree the "ay synth" should go. The build with white noise completely destroys the synth when it comes in. The drums are a little weak and lost at times. The beginning is very nice though. I'd love to hear a version focused around that idea. Good Listen. :)
The drop at 1:55 was decent. i quite enjoyed it. The bass production here was swell. The arrangement seemed a little bland in the beginning, and out of key at times, with the pitch-sweeping synth at 0:29, though. The track lacks clarity at times as well in the highs and mids, but the lows seem decently clear. Maybe too much going on? Good listen though. :)
Thanks! You should check out my newer stuff.
I enjoyed the track. The white noise is a little loud, but otherwise a good production. :)
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